I wrote a short story, just a spur of the moment thing, and people said that I should continue writing. What do you guys think? Here is the story below, please pardon any grammatical errors, or anything of that sort.
One day, there was a man named Bob. Bob wasn't a very tall man, but he sure had alot of heart at whatever he did.I just so happened, that Bob was wrestling at a very prestigious college, at the weight of 215 lbs. All through out his college career, he lost only twice to the same person. Bigy McBiggerson. On the first chance meeting, Bob was wrestling against Biggy his freshman year. As soon as the Ref blew the whistle, the duo were locked at the heads. Biggy manuvered a duck under on Bob, and before Bob knew it, he was flat on his stomach, Biggy getting the only points scored for hip control. Bob fought hard all throughout the match, but it just wasnt enough, Bigee was just to skilled an athlete for Bob. Bob used that loss to push him forward in his wrestling. The next time Bob and Bigy met, they were at an All-American wrestling tournament. Bob pulled a low single on Bigy, and got hip control, catching Bigy off of his guard. Bigy knew he had to score, and he relied on pure adrenaline and skill to reverse the position on Bob for the win. Bob tried and tried to work his way back up, but he just couldn't. After the match, Bigy took bob to the side. "That was a hell of a match, you might even beat me," was all he could say. The weird thing was, was that Bob had a feeling that they might never meet again. As Bob and Bigy went to the airport to get back home, they couldn't help but think,"What an amazing athlete that guy was!" Bob's flight was smooth, but something was lingering in the back of his mind. As soon as Bob was back on the ground, he kept overhearing people saying,"yeah, right after take off, it just blew up". Then he heard,"Flight 96". "Oh my god! That was Bigy's flight!" He just sat down on a bench and cried.He stayed there all night until he wreslting coach came and found him. When Bob looked into his coaches eyes, and the coach into his tear stained face, they had an equal understanding of how eachother felt. One had lost a freind, opponent, while the other had lost a nephew. Bobs coach was Johnny McBiggerson. Bigy's family had personally asked Bob to speak at his funeral, because they had heard so much about him from Bigy himself, and from Johnny McBiggerson. When the time came, Bob came to the alter, and said," Bigy was an amazing athlete, freind, son and nephew. What we don't know about life is that every moment, it is the end for some, the beginning for many, and no matter what we do, we all go by so fast. We have to stay strong with our morals, love our families, and live to the fullest, because you never know what is going to happen when. In the end, all we have in love." And with that, he took his seat, folded his hands and started praying.
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One day, there was a man named Bob. Bob wasn't a very tall man, but he sure had alot of heart at whatever he did.I just so happened, that Bob was wrestling at a very prestigious college, at the weight of 215 lbs. All through out his college career, he lost only twice to the same person. Bigy McBiggerson. On the first chance meeting, Bob was wrestling against Biggy his freshman year. As soon as the Ref blew the whistle, the duo were locked at the heads. Biggy manuvered a duck under on Bob, and before Bob knew it, he was flat on his stomach, Biggy getting the only points scored for hip control. Bob fought hard all throughout the match, but it just wasnt enough, Bigee was just to skilled an athlete for Bob. Bob used that loss to push him forward in his wrestling. The next time Bob and Bigy met, they were at an All-American wrestling tournament. Bob pulled a low single on Bigy, and got hip control, catching Bigy off of his guard. Bigy knew he had to score, and he relied on pure adrenaline and skill to reverse the position on Bob for the win. Bob tried and tried to work his way back up, but he just couldn't. After the match, Bigy took bob to the side. "That was a hell of a match, you might even beat me," was all he could say. The weird thing was, was that Bob had a feeling that they might never meet again. As Bob and Bigy went to the airport to get back home, they couldn't help but think,"What an amazing athlete that guy was!" Bob's flight was smooth, but something was lingering in the back of his mind. As soon as Bob was back on the ground, he kept overhearing people saying,"yeah, right after take off, it just blew up". Then he heard,"Flight 96". "Oh my god! That was Bigy's flight!" He just sat down on a bench and cried.He stayed there all night until he wreslting coach came and found him. When Bob looked into his coaches eyes, and the coach into his tear stained face, they had an equal understanding of how eachother felt. One had lost a freind, opponent, while the other had lost a nephew. Bobs coach was Johnny McBiggerson. Bigy's family had personally asked Bob to speak at his funeral, because they had heard so much about him from Bigy himself, and from Johnny McBiggerson. When the time came, Bob came to the alter, and said," Bigy was an amazing athlete, freind, son and nephew. What we don't know about life is that every moment, it is the end for some, the beginning for many, and no matter what we do, we all go by so fast. We have to stay strong with our morals, love our families, and live to the fullest, because you never know what is going to happen when. In the end, all we have in love." And with that, he took his seat, folded his hands and started praying.
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