
05/21/11, 10:11 AM
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Mountaineers are free
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Join Date: Sep 2008
Location: West Virginia
Posts: 941
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I'll be adding a longer chapter probably tomorrow... Sorry for the delay, but I have been doing wedding practice for a friends wedding. And the sun finally shined for two days and we got back on some farm projects. I'll certainly try to be consistent with posting, but ya'll know how farm work goes with weather and how far behind all of us eat coasters are with the massive amounts of rain this spring. I will put more paragraph breaks in and the second chapter develop the characters better. This is a first attempt so if anyone want to edit or critique, I'll take it.
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