
10/02/13, 05:07 AM
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HOW do they DO that?
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Join Date: Oct 2012
Location: Southwest Michigan
Posts: 1,663
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Nice website!
This stuck out for me ....1st sentence, 4th paragraph on home page, sounds dated:
Our herd has just tested negative yet again for CAE in 2011, and kids are bottle raised on heat-treated colostrum and pasteurized milk.
Maybe take the 2nd sentence and move it to the beginning so it reads like this:
We routinely test the entire herd every winter, and kids are bottle raised on heat-treated colostrum and pasteurized milk.
Then it will always read as up to date.
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